Re-worded first paragraph for clarity (#10)

Author: JonHall101

docs/schemas.md

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 # Data Schemas
 
-Without proper context and structure, the data collected by Factory+ is useless. Connecting multiple types and variants of devices to a common architecture poses a challenge due to the significant variation in data structures and naming schemes. To address this issue, Factory+ has developed a Data Schema specification that allows new or existing models to be represented across the framework in a modular, reusable, consistent and well-understood format. This ensures that the data is gathered in a standardised manner and eliminates the need for manual data processing.
+Without proper context and structure, the data collected by a smart factory is useless. Connecting multiple types and variants of devices to a common architecture poses a challenge due to the significant variation in data structures and naming schemes. To address this issue, Factory+ includes a Data Schema specification that allows new or existing models to be represented across the framework in a modular, reusable, consistent and well-understood format. This ensures that the data is gathered in a standardised manner and eliminates the need for manual data processing.
 
-It is important to acknowledge that although Factory+ Schemas allow for the creation of new models, their purpose is not to replace the modelling efforts of existing specifications such as OPC UA Companion Specifications or MTConnect. Instead, the Schema definition provides guidelines for how model files should be represented, using JSONSchema, without dictating the specific content of those models. The AMRC has however developed a small collection of models that are utilised internally and [have been released as open-source resources](https://github.com/AMRC-FactoryPlus/schemas).
+It is important to acknowledge that although Factory+ Schemas allow for the creation of new models, their purpose is not to replace the modelling efforts of existing specifications such as OPC UA Companion Specifications or MTConnect. Instead, the Schema definition provides guidelines for how model files should be represented, using JSONSchema, without dictating the specific content of those models. The AMRC has also developed a small collection of models that are utilised internally and [have been released as open-source resources](https://github.com/AMRC-FactoryPlus/schemas).
 
 ## Factory+ Schema Specification