Fixed grammar errors and changed text content

Fixed grammar errors and changed text content

Author: Molter

_posts/2015-02-10-be-a-sponsor.md

@@ -4,43 +4,24 @@ title:  "Be a sponsor"
 date:   2015-02-10 19:50:00
 categories: meetup sponsor
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 ## Why would I be a sponsor?
-
-Well, it depends...
-
-Code Beers is an open/community driven event of developers.
-That means that there it's not aimed for general public, so, if you want to
-sponsor the meeting, would be good to know what to expect in return.
-
-For example, it _you_ are a company seeking for _ninja developers_, Code Beers 
-could be an excelent ooportunity to meet some candidates. If _you_ are a company
-who seels _software as a service_ it would be an excelent oportunity to find connections.
-
-Or you can sponsor us just to help the meeting and keep the discussion on.
+There are several reasons to sponsor a code beers event!
+Code Beers is an open/community driven event of software developers, so it isn't aimed for general public.
+Let us say _you_ are a company seeking for _ninja developers_, Code Beers could be a great opportunity to meet some excellent candidates. 
+In the other hand, if _you_ are a company who sells _software as a service_ it would be an excellent opportunity to find connections with the people who made such decisions inside the companies.
+Anyway, you can always sponsor us just because you sympathize with the event itself.
 
 ### How to sponsor?
+Someone must pay the beer, so cash assistance is the mostly needed. Off course gifts like pens, stickers, coasters or discount coupons are also very welcome.
 
-We seek mainly for money (someone must pay for the beer), but gifts like bottons,
-sticker, coasters or discount coupons are also wellcome.
-
-There is no form or paper to fill. Just send an e-mail to 
-[{{ site.contacts[1].email }} and/or {{ site.contacts[0].email }}][sponsor-mail] telling 
-us that you want to sponsor Code Beers and let's talk about it.
+There is no form nor paper to fill, just send an e-mail to 
+[{{ site.contacts[1].email }} and/or {{ site.contacts[0].email }}][sponsor-mail] telling us that you want to sponsor Code Beers and let's talk about it.
 
 You can also contact us by Twitter, on @{{ site.contacts[1].twitter_username }} or @{{ site.contacts[0].twitter_username }}.
 
 ### What a sponsor can do?
 
-Every sponsor will be listed on the main page of this website, with the logo 
-and name provided for us, and on the meeting first-minutes-wellcome<sup>1</sup>.
-
-Every sponsor is wellcome to show it's company, product or project at
-the meeting, by a presentation<sup>1</sup> (~5 minutes) and by talking with
-the participants.
-
+Every sponsor will be highlighted on the event website main page, having the logo and name provided for us properly highlighted, we would thank you and talk about your company during the event as well.
+Every sponsor is welcome to show its company information, product or project at the meeting, we will reserve a time especially for you to talk with the participants (~5 minutes).
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-<small><sup>1</sup> When we have a projector or television available for presentations.</small>
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 [sponsor-mail]: mailto:{{ site.contacts[1].email }}?cc={{ site.contacts[0].email }}&subject="[Code Beers] Let me be a sponsor"