Merge pull request #1170 from isaacphysics/improvement/ethics-approved-copy-change

Update notification banners for clarity

Author: jsharkey13

src/app/components/navigation/LLMFreeTextQuestionInfoBanner.tsx

@@ -87,8 +87,9 @@ function GeneralInfoCopy(_props: InfoBannerProps) {
             This means that the marks you receive will not always be accurate. For more information, read our <Link to={locationOfFAQEntry} target="_blank">FAQs</Link>.
         </p>
         <p>
-            We only send your answer to OpenAI, we do not send any personal data;
-            you can withdraw your consent at any time in your <Link to={`/account#${ACCOUNT_TAB[ACCOUNT_TAB.betafeatures]}`}>account settings</Link>.
+            Do not include personal data in your answer as we send your answer to OpenAI.
+            We only send your answer, we do not send any personal data with it.
+            You can withdraw your consent at any time in your <Link to={`/account#${ACCOUNT_TAB[ACCOUNT_TAB.betafeatures]}`}>account settings</Link>.
         </p>
     </>;
 }

src/app/components/navigation/ResearchNotificationBanner.tsx

@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ export const ResearchNotificationBanner = () => {
                 </RS.Col>
                 <RS.Col xs={12} sm={10} md={8}>
                     <small>
-                        Use of this website and the information entered is being recorded.
-                        This data is used to support research into online learning at the University of Cambridge{isAda ? " and the Raspberry Pi Foundation" : ""}.
+                        We record your use of this site and the information you enter to support research into
+                        online learning at the University of Cambridge{isAda ? " and the Raspberry Pi Foundation" : ""}.
                         Full details are in the <Link to="/privacy">privacy policy</Link>.
                     </small>
                 </RS.Col>